18A – Create a Customer Avatar

18A – Create a Customer Avatar

This avatar is a go getter. It likes to travel. This avatar needs a way of transportation. this avatar drives a Mercades Benz C- Class. This avatar also drives a scooter. This avatar is a UF Gators student and a fan. This avatar's favorite sport is soccer and his favorite team is Manchester untied. This avatar like to go to the gym and needs to eat a lot.

What I have in common with my avatar is a lot. I love to travel. I love soccer and we have the same team of interest. I love to go to the gym and to keep my physique I do have to eat a lot. Me and the avatar have a lot in common.

These traits are things that a customer who would use my app would have. I would use my app for sure. I thin that any other people the same or similar to me would use my app as well. I think this app I pictures is very universal and people who for sure travel or drive a vehicle will need it.

Comments

  1. Hi Tommy, I enjoyed reading your description of your avatar, and I think that you have some good traits identified, like what the avatar drives and some of their favorite activities. However I think you could add a lot more detail. What is their name and gender? What does your avatar like to do WHEN they travel? Do they have a job outside of being a student, or are they a full-time student? What kind of C-class do they drive (year, color, is it a C250, C300, C43 AMG, or C63 AMG)? Since they're a student, maybe also mention where they're originally from. Your post also has a lot of typos, and the sentence structure is bland and repetitive, so definitely proofread in the future and work on making your sentences longer and more thought-out. A bunch of short sentences that only convey one idea in each of them all put together don't read well. I do agree that your app is very universal and anyone who drives a vehicle and travels would likely be interested in using it.

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