22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

What I learned in the last pitch was that I need to explain more less of how I came up with my idea. This will then help with lessening my video and will not go over a minute and thirty seconds. I like this because then I can just talk about what my product does. I will not explain its weaknesses. I am really happy with my outfit. I know what to wear now and what to look appropriate with. People liked where I changed up and now wear a more business attire outfit. I have to identify my product and the problem it solves quicker. This will also help with decreasing my time making it straight to the point I got to come right into how my product works right after I explain the problem. This will help with targeting my audience and my audience will see if they are intrigued or not. This will also help with the ones that it does target and they will be more interested.Pitch 3

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  1. Jacob JenkinsApril 4, 2020 at 12:55 PM

    Hi Tommy, I thought your third pitch was a huge improvement from the previous one. You did a very good job of quickly identifying the problem, describing your product, explaining how your product solves the problem, and listing the benefits of your product. I thought your outfit was very good, as it also was with the second pitch. Your pacing and delivery were also far better, and there were only one or two spots where you stumbled a little bit, but for the most part, it was very good!

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